There's a lot of energy there for sure! I think you are right about the panned guitar, but it does sound better when there is more going on in the left channel, plus musically too it sounds more accomplished in that section.
If I were editing the song I think I would make more of the vocal, so for example leave it a bit before the soloing guitar takes over. I think there needs to be more of a 'song' there, if you get me, but there's some raw ingredients that show promise, so keep,working on it