https://jackdiamond.bandcamp.com/releasesHey everyone. I know the productions not great but im still in the learning process and have pretty shitty equipment atm. let me know what you think
I wrote the majority of this song quite a while ago when I was dealing with some very difficult personal issues. The song is my attempt at conveying the very numb and emotionless state i ended up getting myself into during these difficult times.
Im looking for general feedback on lyrics, and just want to know what you think to the style of it.
Lyrics:
What will it take, to make my blues go away
I wanna feel, feel something instead of nothing
I swear for a second, i felt my heartbeat through my chest
Probably not for love, but for all the drugs in my blood
Pretty flowers and sunshine, wont make me smile honey
Grey clouds and rain drops wont make me cry honey
Pretty flowers and sunshine wont make me smile
Grey clouds and rain drops wont make me cry, now honey
What will it take, to make my blues go away
I wanna feel, feel something instead of nothing
I swear for a second, i felt my heartbeat through my chest
Probably not for love, but for all the drugs in my blood
Pretty flowers and sunshine, wont make me smile honey
Grey clouds and rain drops wont make me cry honey
Pretty flowers and sunshine wont make me smile
Grey clouds and rain drops wont make me cry, now honey