Hey all.
This is a song I started at the weekend. It's not finished yet and this is a very rough mix. I think I still have a way to go before it's finished. I've gone with the first arrangement I could think of, although originally I'd intended it to be a guitar band song.
I'd be keen for all constructive feedback in terms of the arrangement, song structure etc. What would you do differently and how would you improve it?
You're obviously all very talented and experienced people, and this is the first time I have ever asked for feedback when a song is unfinished (mainly because I don't know any other songwriters or arrangers).
Oh, and hopefully this will end up with real drums on it eventually.