Great opening line but then you leave us hanging in mid-air. I want to know why is she/he dangerous, what has happened, how you feel, what you are going to do, are you going to stick or twist.
the rest of your words seem to be from another song. There are some good lines in the rest of your lyrics but nothing that screams she's dangerous, what happens next.
Sorry, please free to ignore me if you disagree.
Keith
I think I found a different meaning and made a bit of a breakthrough with the words. It's now a song about how people (i.e. his parents) always regard the girl as dangerous, and how the guy breaks free and ignores their opinions; she's not actually dangerous, and he's going to prove it, but not necessarily in the politest of fashions. It's quite rough, and I'm probably going to change the structure, but I've got the meaning down now.I found somebody dangerous;
We'll see if I ever learn to play it down.
I swear we don't need someone to save us
And if we did you would be hearing it loud.
I've learnt to trust all my instincts:
Avoid places far from my watering hole.
Right now they're screaming "Oh shit,"
But my instincts aren't in love with a girl.
And would you trust me if I said
I don't need you anymore.
If you think you must be in control
I'll happily show you to the door.
And if you could prove to me you deserve me
You could be Presi of the USA.
But all you know is your ABC,
You don't know the way I behave.
I found somebody gorgeous;
We'll see if anyone accepts that it's true.
I wish we didn't have someone to police us;
You live on totalitarian avenue.
Do they say sharing is caring?
Well I don't want no caring from you.
Yes, I hear those alarm bells blaring
Here come rozzers with their blues and their twos.
And would you trust me if I said
I don't need you anymore.
If you think you must be in control
I'll happily show you to the door.
And if you could prove to me you deserve me
You could be Presi of the USA.
But all you know is your ABC,
You don't know the way I behave.
If the underworld's for my fire
And heaven above is for my wings,
There's a chance my darling's a liar
But I already bought the wedding ring.