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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: shadowfax on March 09, 2019, 10:07:59 AM
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Been away for a while and aint done nuthin in the way of music..did this a while ago for a bit of fun....
https://soundcloud.com/knmac/i-can-never-win-by-knmacpinky-and-perky-mix
this is the the original if your interested
https://soundcloud.com/knmac/knmac-i-can-never-win
I've never been so lonely, since the day you walked away,
I see you everywhere I look, I need you more each day,
when I'm alone I lead you through, a dark and weary night,
no more a love I know is true, I lose my will to fight,
I can never win, I can never win,
I may as well give in,I can never win,
the love I know would free me, from the prison where i lay,
is out of sight and out of reach, no matter what I say,
my strategy, to make you see, is fading every day,
my fight for love is in retreat, you win, then walk away,
I can never win, I can never win,
I may as well give in, I can never win,
gave you so much, waited so long now it's gone,
I never knew i'd lose the fight,you are too strong,
your my life, your my soul, to have you walk with me is my goal,
anywhere, anytime,everynight I have a dream that your mine,
instrumental bit...........
gave you so much, waited so long now it's gone,
I never knew i'd lose the fight,you are too strong,
I can never win, I can never win,
I may as well give in, I can never win,
©KNmack
best to all, Kevin :)
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Ha- that's a good laugh. Got a mad kind of Euro-disco feel to it, lots of bubblegum energy. Is 'Alvin mix' a reference to Alvin and the Chipmunks? I think I remember the original - did you post that here previously? Glad to hear you are close to recovery by the way.
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@PaulyX (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21034) ..hi. yeah. posted the original one a while ago..just posted this up an octave one for a bit of fun and to get me started again.. :) and yeah it is a reference to what you said..
thanks for the listen :)