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Isabella Lullaby

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Pez

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« on: April 22, 2012, 09:45:38 PM »
featuring my good lady on guest vocals ;D

http://dannypez.bandcamp.com/track/isabella-lullaby

Isabella Lullaby,
Purple butterfly,
dont just flutter by
sit upon a leaf with me,
below the rose,
shaded from the rays,
mind the thorns
you dont wanna make your thumb sore

By the way, did I say I love you x2

Youre my sunshine,
Scarlet sunset,
Moonlight drive
see venus in the night sky
apple of my eye,
sugar plum fairy,
magic tree climb,
slide down a rainbow
dont find a pot of gold,
but we dont care
ride BMX's to a picturesque nowhere

By the way, did I say I love you x2

..

Dont be blue bell,
youre bellismo,
be Giacinto,
Stand tall and beat them all,
as the tide rolls in
get ready to go home,
as I stroll, hum my Isabella lullaby...

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« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2012, 11:23:38 PM »
this is real good pez
gtr reminds of early metal like sabbath and then nicely ‘delic in the change
& like the spirit in the vocals...great chorus
a menacing bass and drums to match it would be a bonus...
good stuff
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« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2012, 11:30:34 PM »
this has a huge british psychedelic feel to it...real freakbeat from the lyrics to the fuzzed out guitars..& its great
but what happened with the drums they only sort of came in at the end
you must put drums on it it could sound awesome...the best thing youve posted for me anyway
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« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2012, 01:25:33 AM »
The vocal melody throughout the verse sounds insanely familiar... I think there may have been some accidental ripping off there...

That aside, I think this is an excellent track! I agree with Tinam, I want to hear some drums in there (I have a fever, and the only prescription is more cowbell!)
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« Reply #4 on: April 23, 2012, 03:15:48 AM »
Hey :)

Put Sabbath in mind for me too. I liked it, especially the contrast between sections.
Personally I don't think it's in a finished state yet but it has potential. Definately needs some thudding drums.
Good stuff  :)
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« Reply #5 on: April 23, 2012, 09:29:18 AM »
Hi,

I pretty much agree with what's been said before, not in a finished state & the drums need some work but well on the way to a good track :) :)

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« Reply #6 on: April 23, 2012, 05:20:16 PM »
thanks for the feedback, i did have some drums on here but as I'm not very good on them it kind of let the track down. I'll have another bash...

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« Reply #7 on: April 23, 2012, 06:35:39 PM »
Liked this lots - yes get the early Sab connection. Big potential - would love to hear the next version with the drums. Good stuff. BTB
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« Reply #8 on: April 23, 2012, 10:55:10 PM »
Great stuff.

Definitely feels like a proof of concept as it is. Some big splashy drums will fill out the space nicely. Nice groove, nice idea splitting the harmonies between the two vocals.

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« Reply #9 on: April 24, 2012, 11:15:41 AM »
 bit like a sabbath song with bowie singing , in need of a bit of lead guitar and what the others said about drums.   good tune ,i like it  ;)
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« Reply #10 on: April 24, 2012, 03:14:25 PM »
very nice pez. i hear some early bowie (man who sold the world album) too. just enough, not to much.



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« Reply #11 on: April 25, 2012, 03:21:43 PM »
yes,  that is great,

very not my music, but i like this a lot

the difference in intensity between the parts is great (and yes, with a drum track that could be accentuated further)

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« Reply #12 on: April 25, 2012, 03:52:00 PM »
Very good Pez , very much like pajama party and some excellent changes :)

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« Reply #13 on: April 28, 2012, 10:29:44 AM »
Whoa!!!
Love this.
Really good, like the minimalist approach to the drums. The guitars sound great, like your vocals.
Don't know what else to say apart from i love this track  8)

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« Reply #14 on: April 28, 2012, 06:39:52 PM »


Like this, great intro and guitar work, keep em coming :D