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Title: Delicious Grace - Rosa Glamurosa
Post by: alcapone_dudu on August 13, 2020, 07:59:47 PM
Hi guys!  Hope everybody is doing ok during this crazy time. So... we've got a new song out. This one is portuguese, I hope you don't mind. The song is called ''Rosa Glamurosa''.



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My previous songs:
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=13844.0
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=15865.0
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=16127.0
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=16328.0
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=16605.0
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=16911.0
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=17271.0
Title: Re: Delicious Grace - Rosa Glamurosa
Post by: alcapone_dudu on August 13, 2020, 08:00:16 PM
Lyrics:

Vejo nos seus olhos
Um aperto, uma vontade
O que te faz correr atrás?

Todas as esquinas são iguais
O mesmo porto, o mesmo cais
Tarde demais

Em busca do desejo
A vontade ia aumentando
O final dessa trama será uma confusão

Ela fugiu quando acordou
Em busca de outro amor
E de coisas que nunca viu

Ele ficou e suspirou
No peito havia um coração que nunca mais sentiu

O tempo vai correndo no relógio
E ele nunca volta mais
Não olhe pra trás

Todas as instâncias e os caminhos que te levam
Costumaz
Não ligue mais
Title: Re: Delicious Grace - Rosa Glamurosa
Post by: Arthur_Satine on August 21, 2020, 01:09:42 AM
I think you should re-record the song. Who wrote the instrumental? If you don't own it, consider writing your own.
Title: Re: Delicious Grace - Rosa Glamurosa
Post by: alcapone_dudu on September 04, 2020, 02:56:42 PM
Quote from: Arthur_Satine on August 21, 2020, 01:09:42 AM
I think you should re-record the song. Who wrote the instrumental? If you don't own it, consider writing your own.

Hey Arthur. We will re-record it some time in the future. Now it's just a rough demo.
Title: Re: Delicious Grace - Rosa Glamurosa
Post by: Kafla on September 04, 2020, 04:07:59 PM
And most surreal thread of the forum goes to...
Title: Re: Delicious Grace - Rosa Glamurosa
Post by: alcapone_dudu on November 19, 2020, 06:47:59 PM
Quote from: kafla on September 04, 2020, 04:07:59 PM
And most surreal thread of the forum goes to...

That's gotta be mine!