Another fine song Mora.

Here some grammar mistakes distract
But all is forgiven

Starts to get even more interesting from 1.50
It does come across as a rain dance
with spooky undertones.

Hi Kevin. Welcome to the forum.

I took a look at your page and flicked through some of your songs. Whilst there seems to be a lot of country music (my pet hate ), there is some great music and productions in other genre's.

What kind of collaboration are you looking for out of interest?

Hi Everyone,
I'm a songwriter seeking to collaborate with talented singers/musicians/producers.
Here's my Reverbnation music site so you can check out my songwriting style:
https://www.reverbnation.com/httpcdbabycomcdkevinnevel
You can contact me at: kevinnevel4@gmail.com
Let's collaborate & create great songs together!
Best,
-Kevin

The song has a sense of the. sadness or melancholy that I love, that piano is great, it creates an enveloping atmosphere and covers the voice while telling the story.
The change in the arrangement gives it strength without losing that melancholy and the guitars give it a touch of more vivid color. Good change at approximately 2'45, I didn't expect it and I liked it. Naa more and all that I tell you, very good song and interesting lyrics. @Nick Ryder

Thank you Paul, it all seems to be fitting into place at the moment, so definitely  in my happy place,

George