Hey guys!
I've been playing piano and writing songs for a few months.
I'm really enjoying the process, but this is just a hobby I do at home when I have time.
I was hoping to get some feedback on some of my songs.
This song is called 'The Game'.
It only have one verse & a chorus so far.
The recording is quite bad. I don't have any proper recording / mixing equipment.
I made all the music for this song on my keyboard, and essentially recorded in 4 layers, adding another instrument each time. I apologise for the bad quality; but please take the recording as the 'bones' of the song, it's very much a work in progress.
This song is about "that person". We all know her/him. She/he is AMAZING in the sack... but they simply don't want to commit. Amazing chemistry but, but no progression to a relationship. See; 'Friends with Benefits'.
Lyrics:
V1
Cards to my chest, put up my walls
To not mistake, glitter for gold
Yes I remember, stories foretold
I will not, go down that road
Fucking up the walls, ‘til 4am
Hotel Rooms, money well spent
Neighbours banging on the walls
We don’t care we just get it on
I know your need for intimacy
It overrides your fear of commitment
But you sure did fool me
'Cause you're not looking for a partner
Just someone to throw down
& you threw me down
CHORUS
I could make, all your dreams
Come true, does that sound good to you?
You’ve got all the right moves
But you’re a game
And I’m never winning first place
I’m never winning checkmate
Hope you like. I know the singing is um... poor. I'm working on it!
https://soundcloud.com/maximus_xv/the-game-test