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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: What would you dream
« Last post by Jazz101 on Yesterday at 04:25:21 PM »
Hi Chris,

I just tried the link and it is working fine for me, there should be two songs if you scroll down, one is what would you dream and the other is the voice, anyway try this one,
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fo/yjziyi77qvxzxw6swhex8/AFS3APjjRMIDCY3XG0wYZiE?rlkey=pixm4woztmziqbvjuujpd1c6a&st=krngyr1b&dl=0
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: You
« Last post by ChrisPrice on Yesterday at 04:02:31 PM »
The first thing that hit me was the interesting chord progressions. There's a lot happening here and yet it all sound perfectly relaxed. Great vocal which is no surprise. A fabulous track. :)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: You (are not broken)
« Last post by ChrisPrice on Yesterday at 03:59:56 PM »
An extraordinary song. Very profound. I can't really offer any critique because it's so unusual and it had me hooked all the way through. If I'm honest, it isn't the kind of song I'd usually listen to but, nonetheless, well done. :)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: How We Feel Inside (warning, includes strong language)
« Last post by ChrisPrice on Yesterday at 03:53:55 PM »
When I saw the strong language flag I was expecting something raw and angry. But then I saw who's song it was and I knew it would be something classy. And this certainly is Paul. Fabulous playing and a delicate vocal which is what I've come to expect from you. I'm loving those lyrics too. Indeed it's such a lottery. Brilliant :)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Fly With Angels
« Last post by ChrisPrice on Yesterday at 03:46:50 PM »
Indeed, a bit more of a rock song than your other songs I've heard. I love this song. As usual the production is fabulous. I can't think of anything I'd change here. Loving it. :)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Navasota Blues
« Last post by ChrisPrice on Yesterday at 03:43:41 PM »
This kinda reminds me of early Captain Beefheart. Whatever, I really like this one. Loving the harmonica to. Your best yet imho. :)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: What would you dream
« Last post by ChrisPrice on Yesterday at 03:41:44 PM »
I'm getting a link to a different song. If I click on 'Music' I can then see this song but it won't play.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Midnight Utopias
« Last post by ChrisPrice on Yesterday at 03:37:24 PM »
Great intro. Very hypnotics. I often lose track of time. Especially when I'm up late working on a song. Another classic track Mora. I really enjoyed this. :)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Midnight Utopias
« Last post by Jazz101 on Yesterday at 02:11:30 PM »
Hola @moraamarolaloba,
I’m not experienced enough to give a deep analysis of your song but I know what sounds good and your songs always create a mood which I like, another great song, thank you for sharing,
George
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Feedback on Finished songs / What would you dream
« Last post by Jazz101 on Yesterday at 01:29:54 PM »
Hi all,

This is a song I wrote about the difference we could make if we were all on the same page.
Just click on this link to my website https://songsbygeorge.bandzoogle.com/home
click music button and then the play button there is no need to purchase it, hope you like it,
George

Here are the lyrics

What would you dream
     
What if you could have a dream and make that dream come true
What would you dream?

Would you dream that all our conflicts could be settled overnight
Would you dream that every child on earth could have a better life
Or maybe you would dream that our planet could be saved
Or maybe dream that we all changed our ways
What would you dream ?

Chorus
if we all had the same dreams,  could we make it good ?
If we all had the same dreams I’m sure we could
Nothing has to stay, the way it’s been If we dare to dream
Nothing has to stay the way it’s been  If we dare to dream

2nd verse

What if you could have a dream and make that dream come true
What would you dream?

Would you dream that all the wars we’ve had were memories from the past
Would you dream of peace in the Middle East and pray that peace would last
Or maybe you would dream, that all cancers could be cured
Or maybe dream that no one would be poor
What would you dream ?                                                   

Then repeat chorus

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