So I made some changes
the original lyrics in the verses didn't say much to me
The agressive vulnerability in the song really appealed to me.
morrissey hires session musicians and they work together.
This makes me wonder how much or how many of his songs are really, or to what extent are written by him.
If someone gives me a chord progression for the the verses alone, I see the song as a colaboration.
And collaboration or not, if it works I'm happy.
Please enjoy
and feeedback is always welcome
https://soundcloud.com/rightly/yhavekilledmeyou have killed me
not all comes for free
not mouthwash, not memory
I entered nothing and
and nothing entered me
until you came with the key
and you did your best but
as I live and breathe
you have killed me
you have killed me
Yes, I walk around somehow
but you have killed me
you've killed me
piaza Cavor, what's my life for?
With designs to achieve
nice try but really there wasn't any need
I answered nothing 'cuz,
'cuz no one asked of me
it was hard, truly hard to believe when
you did your best
but as I live and breathe
you have killed me
you have killed me
Yes, I walk around somehow
but you have killed me
you've killed me
So who am I that I should come to be here, to be here...
but as I live and breathe
you have killed me
you have killed me
Yes, I walk around somehow
but you have killed me
you've killed me
and there is no point in saying this again
there is no, point in saying this again
but I forgive you, I forgive
as ever I forgive you________________________________________