You Have Killed Me __ (my cover of the morrissey song)

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« on: March 16, 2018, 10:11:57 AM »
So I made some changes
the original lyrics in the verses didn't say much to me

The agressive vulnerability in the song really appealed to me.

morrissey hires session musicians and they work together.
This makes me wonder how much or how many of his songs are really, or to what extent are written by him.
If someone gives me a chord progression for the the verses alone, I see the song as a colaboration.
And collaboration or not, if it works I'm happy.

Please enjoy
and feeedback is always welcome


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you have killed me

not all comes for free
not mouthwash, not memory
I entered nothing and
and nothing entered me
until you came with the key
and you did your best but

as I live and breathe
you have killed me
you have killed me
Yes, I walk around somehow
but you have killed me
you've killed me

piaza Cavor, what's my life for?

With designs to achieve
nice try but really there wasn't any need
I answered nothing 'cuz,
'cuz no one asked of me
it was hard, truly hard to believe when
you did your best

but as I live and breathe
you have killed me
you have killed me
Yes, I walk around somehow
but you have killed me
you've killed me

So who am I that I should come to be here, to be here...

but as I live and breathe
you have killed me
you have killed me
Yes, I walk around somehow
but you have killed me
you've killed me

and there is no point in saying this again
there is no, point in saying this again
but I forgive you, I forgive
as ever I forgive you



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« Last Edit: March 16, 2018, 10:22:38 AM by Rightly »
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2018, 10:23:09 AM »
Ah I forgot to add the link!!
lol.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly

https://soundcloud.com/rightly

Katie Wilson

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« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2018, 12:06:26 PM »
Has anyone ever told you that you have a resemblance to Graham Norton

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« Reply #3 on: March 16, 2018, 12:22:40 PM »
my voice
or looks?

I don't know Graham Norton.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly

https://soundcloud.com/rightly

Katie Wilson

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« Reply #4 on: March 16, 2018, 01:11:21 PM »
Your looks of the telly