afternoon, I've been tasked with writing a song for a boxer I know to use as his entrance song. I was struggling with the music so decided to do my own thing on a Jay Z track - Public Service Announcement. Not sure if anyone is familiar with it but just wanted peoples thoughts on how its going so far. I do want to use my own beat eventually but it's hard when I like this one so much. Apologies in advance for not commenting on others yet, I'm just a bit of time but I will listen and comment to a good few tomorrow.
https://soundcloud.com/user-586564289/steviej-focus-on-the-enemy-x/s-FmClFsxN1Dd?si=c0b5c77b442f4188965743c364886580&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharingFocus On The Enemy - Lyrics
Intro
Soak it up
listen to what they're telling me
breathe in
channel the nervous energy
breathe out
focus on the enemy
focus on the enemy
Verse 1
And when the bell rings
I’m going all in
I won’t stop until I got him fallin
I’m a be the one promotors will be calling
Once I got him feeding through a straw in the morning
This ain’t a warning
I’m just telling you what’s gunna happen
Like a prime Ricky Hatton
He’s gunna look at me and wonder how to catch him
Might need some Peas for that eyes kinda blackened
My jab sting like a bee but my uppercut will have him flattened
So throw in the towel bro and call it quits
He don’t wanna suffer another of Griffs hits
so yeaaaaah let’s face it, I’m the shit (repeat)
Break
Soak it up
Listen to what they’re telling me
Breath in
Channel the nervous energy
Breathe out
Focus on the enemy
Focus on the enemy
Focus on the enemy
Focus on the enemy
Verse 2
Let me tell you what I’m gunna do
If you dare to step back in the ring for round 2
Like 4 quarter pounders I’m a pound you
And ground you down to a pulp - man
I’m incredible like the Hulk - man
If you had a chin left you could sulk - man
But my advice would be for you walk
Forget all the talk cause I’m about the action
You just a boy getting in the way of my traction
Cause until I hit the top I won’t feel no satisfaction
Quick maths, Subtraction, take him away
Sorry bro but today’s not your day
It’s mine, so you better call it quits
Sorry but for you this is just another swing and a miss
so yeeeah let’s face it I’m the shit (repeat)
Soak it up
Listen to what they’re telling me
Breath in
Channel the nervous energy
Breathe out
Focus on the enemy
Focus on the enemy