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Title: Limbo ( short lyrics)
Post by: postmn on March 06, 2011, 08:06:46 PM
Rap,

I'm a saint and a sinner, there is no winner
i drink too much and i pray alot
like my father, i have forgetable nights
at the church they say im playing with god
im not looking for myself, i just lost my breath

The doctors once said i got mental stress
if you were stuck in limbo you would feel like me bro
mabye im dreamin this up and im on shutter island
how can we telll the truth, put an ice pick through my eye-lid
i've not got a body, so im not dreaming, im truly stuck in limbo.