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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: mstesson on April 26, 2024, 03:23:36 PM

Title: Daylight Dreamer
Post by: mstesson on April 26, 2024, 03:23:36 PM

Hi all,

Swedish amateur songwriter here.

I just finished a new demo:

Would appreciate some constructive feedback. Thank you all!

Regards

Stefan

Title: Re: Daylight Dreamer
Post by: mstesson on April 27, 2024, 12:48:18 PM

The song is about a girl that is daydreaming and hoping for having success in life.

English is not my native language so would appreciate feedback on the lyrics also. (Lyrics is in the song description on soundboard)

Title: Re: Daylight Dreamer
Post by: Elvis Nash on April 27, 2024, 04:30:56 PM

Låter bra man, har en riktigt bra känsla för det

Title: Re: Daylight Dreamer
Post by: mstesson on April 30, 2024, 12:11:05 PM

Tack!

Title: Re: Daylight Dreamer
Post by: ChrisPrice on May 01, 2024, 11:59:29 PM

Sounds good to me. Not really my genre but everything fits as it should. it has an 80's feel to it. Nothing wrong with that. I enjoyed this :)