Jack I love your work, this is another Simmons classic, thanks.
I listened on tracking cans' which tend to be a little bass heavy...
I felt the LVox could have benefitted from doubling att 'You had the time of your life' line, just to pull it out a bit ,I found there were patches on exposed LVox, that is it was beginning to sound like it needed something different going on, I could hear you did it later in the song, with additinal syth motifs.
Anyways, just a little thing Jack, and assomeone else said, Pets Shop vs OMD, in fact it just struck me that a plucked Jazz bass might work on here? just a thought..
Hope this helps, and as another said, please stick around.
cpm