Hey Girlinside
When you mentioned Cloudburst by Oasis, I googled the lyrics just for reference to your song. I've gotta say, It's very much a reductive version of the song you were inspired by. A few of the lines are just carbon copies to the oasis one. There's a bit of nuance to it by including the reference of a Katie Wilson and the "need to be the woman inside". If you're going for a person who wants to write about a man who's been struggling and hurting in his journey towards being free from societal pressures, then by all means - write that beautiful story.
To have inspiration from another song is one thing, but I don't think your use of inspiration was efficient.