Hey hey,
I was watching Defenders on Netflix, and on one of the first episodes Daredevil is talking to a kid who's recently lost the ability to walk.
He basically tells the kid that the world wont be there to help him, and it's up to him to rebuild and make a life he's happy with.
I liked the sentiment so rolled with it, to create this kind of "tragedy to realistic hopefulness of endeavour".
I want to put some real effort into this. Most of my lyrics are overly personal and I'm not a fan of sharing them outside of this forum but this one's slightly detached, more relatable and I think I'd feel more comfortable performing it.
I think the message for each section is pretty spot on so far..
1: I get it bro, you're screwed
2: No light at the end of the tunnel?
3: Got no time to sulk bro
4: Gotta' pave the way for the new
5: Yeah it's hard, but I believe in you
I'm still trying to think of a 6, so if anyone has any ideas would appreciate some inspiration.
6: So lets bloody do it!
Lyrically I think my least favored is V3.. The sentiment fits but the lyrics are just simply poor.
So would love to hear what you guys think. Is this worth putting forward as a 'big project' or shall I keep knocking them out and wait for something better to come along?
Is the theme too... common? I'm sure there's lots of similar songs around and I pride myself on trying different angles.
I know I've posted this in the lyrics section, so I probably shouldn't post a link, but here's a
very rough recording - just in case it helps put some context to the words.
Oh an excuse me for the Jesus line, I'm not religious but for some unknown reason I really like songs that randomly mention that guy. (Though I can only think of
The Runner off the top of my head.
V1
I know this is the end
Of the world you used to know
Like the lights are fading out
And there's nowhere left to go
V2
Your life's collapsing,
And nothing lasting,
'Cept the never-ending feeling
That you wont ever get past it!
Chorus
Eyes open, Sleeves up,
Boy you got some work to do
Make amends, With Jesusyour soul,
No-one else is helping you
V3
This time's too important,
The crucial moment,
No time to despair,
Keep your future loaded,
v4
It's the end of the old,
But the start of the new,
And it's so much harder,
Than the life which you knew,
Chorus
V5
I know it's challenging,
And the world will knock you down,
But I'm pretty sure you'll manage it,
And fight another round
V6
I know this is the end,
Of the world you used to know,
Now take what you've learnt,
And give it another go!
Big thanks to anyone who's taken the time to read to down here
All the best,
Scott.