[gtp110]

Hi, any feedback welcome.

It is a sketch before production mix and female vocal track.

https://soundcloud.com/gt-p/dont

Thank you

[S.T.C]

Yeah..poppy..sort of owl city...don`t what else to say..quite good?

[likeimglowinginthedark]

[darreldo]

Refreshing to hear something like this on here, I agree with the owl city comment,
the music is well put together

[jmacdon]

Great pop music guys.  A refreshing amalgam of Aqua and Bellefire! I'd be happy to play this on secklowsounds.org

I can't wait to hear your next track.   Good work :-)

[Sing4me88]

Great Pop feel to it. Loving the vocal FX. Agree with Owl City comparison not so sure about the Aqua one though. Like the line about making time speed up and making time slow down. I think a diamond in the rough here. Trick is to make this good start a great finished track fit for pitching. On the right road at least

[likeimglowinginthedark]

Any updates? I liked it.

[Dave Bradley]

Nicely put together pop. But, very much an 80s bubblegum flavour, maybe that's in at the moment, Bruno Marrs did the whole "Police" retro thing with Locked out of Heaven. Looking forward to hearing the version with the non-autotuned female vocal maybe adding some soul will bring it bang up to date by giving it a modern 60s vibe ;-)

[likeimglowinginthedark]

I know I've said this before, but I like it.

[Boydie]

I am not quite sure what you were going for here, which makes a meaningful review a little tricky

Is the intention to go for the "Euro pop" sound, with an almost comedic vocal

OR

Is the intention for the track to be a little more serious with a female vocal - I think a "proper" female vocal on this would transform the feel of the track instantly

Either way, the basic foundation of the song is there and the beat is really strong

I can't wait to here how this one develops so please post an update