Greetings!
I first read this a couple of days ago and was gonna comment on it then, but to tell you the truth, i didnt know how to. Same again yesterday, but once more, i was stuck for words. I still dont know what to make of it, and yet, i keep finding myself seduced in to checking it out again. The first verse, i like, without really knowing why. I concur with "paulski" about the lines he picked up on, hard to get an image, yet somehow it works. I too was also gonna comment on the "stole the key" line in the chorus, but "Paulski" again, beat me to the punch. One word i dont like, and feels out of place is "freaking" that doesnt sit well with me. I dont believe im being to helpful here, apologies for that, but its a tough one to review. Its a little vague in parts, and also quite baffling, but it does have some interesting lines. As i say, i do keep coming back to it, so its got my attention, but in a way im finding hard to explain. Perhaps a comment or two from yourself, would give me a clearer picture.