hi Adam.
Firstly thanks so much for laying out all the production notes in your intro. This is really interesting and a useful reference for us amateurs who can learn a lot from this. Didn’t really understand some of it but I can Google some of the terms eg send to a plate reverb and de-ess on the drums.
The song is easy to listen to tells an interesting story and has a catchy chorus. I like what you have done with the vocals, but perhaps you could have developed vocals further and perhaps added some more backing on the chorus in particular. Feels like the chorus has backing vocal potential beyond what you have done,
Cheers Micky