Hi Lynn
Really cool vibe, nice L and BVox , you've definitely got your 'sound', for your brand, which takes quite a bit of work to establish.
Can't add much really, LOVE the start, my cup of start.
Sounds a bit '60's to me, imagine a vintage kit, with the Ronnettes in the back line, at dance tempo, tambourines, driving bass....wearing a black and white check vinyl dress with a beehive. On early '60's Top Of The Pops, I'd wear a cardigan and slacks with long hair, shirt with my top button done up.
The pulsing synth @2:17 could pan L/R maybe..
What does NSFW mean? I thought it was a state in Australia!
Didn't find it offensive at all.
Cool song
cpm