Hi everyone, I've just joined this helpful site. Thanks for having me.
Simple question: do you think this song is fit for release? If not, I'd be very grateful if you could tell me what could be improved, or even if it's beyond saving!
Thanks so much,
Tony
PS: There is a swearword, but it's been muted out.
LINK:
https://soundcloud.com/angryparadiso/friends-in-low-placesLYRICS
You cannot be coming in here, looking like that
Said a no-neck man on the door
“I couldn’t care less,” I said, “and that’s that
It doesn’t look cold on the floor”
My friends are the corners
My people are the rats
I follow the way of the cat
Cats are such arrogant creatures, they say
But I really wouldn’t have it any other way
It’s a matter of survival
Get the better of your rival
Come out to play
Dogs need their masters, all we need’s a home and a bed
We need your caress like a hole in the head
Br
We always fight this way (X3)
But there’s a better way
Father, forgive your wayward child
He doesn’t play the game like you
He doesn’t pay the fines and he doesn’t pay the tax to the bully,
Like you asked him to
There’s always some nob who’ll call the shots
But we cannot let the robots take the lot
Take it on the chin, let the f*ers in
Then give ‘em everything we’ve got
Dance, dance alleycats! We are your friends
And there’ll always be another way in
The wedding has a list, but there’s something they missed
And we’re never going back again
So call out the Law, call out the Guard
You’re never gonna find us in this yard
You seek, you burn, you fail, you learn
Waiting for your turn
We get no rehearsal, the track awaits the train
The Friends in Low Places are always glad you came
If I was a monkey, my friend – I’d ease your pain
Let’s go out, return again