[MeeshaSilver]

I’ve had enough
 

[HeyYou]

This song is AWESOME but... This chorus is not good enough for me at least..
I think that this chorus is not matching the song... The chorus isn't in the same level
Of the others verses...
I would suggest you to change this chorus..
If to say this is a very good song without that chorus.

[Nellie]

Hiii! I think this is nicely done! I really like some of the lines, but my favourite must be ''Though you don’t see me, you don’t wanna let me go'' -- that is simply brilliant! Great job! And welcome to the forum!

[benjo]

 yeah i agree with HEY YOU  on the chorus


 i think you have a really strong lyric here
 but the chorus feels weak to me to fit this lyric
 there isn't really anything to get the readers attention
 IMHO i think the chorus lets down a good write
 i would work on this part for improvement on this
 hope you have some music to go with it i'd like to hear it

 
               Chorus

Oh, oh, oh, I’ve had enough of you
Why can’t you see we are through?
We were never that good together
Oh, oh, oh, I’ve had enough of you
Why can’t ya just get a clue?
We’re not meant to be two-together


                      GOOD LUCK

 

[jocoword]

brilliant

it just perfect , maybe if we mixed with the right music it will sounds great
good work

[RosilindSings]

I agree with the ones about the chorus. I don't like the ohs sometimes you don't need those extra adlibs. Also, the bridge is my favorite part it is a very strong statement you make there. I think the verses can be rewritten just a little also. The second one especially. I think you have a great  story here. Its just about piecing it together to be understood the way you want it to be.