I agree with the poster who said it started off strongly and then the solo took them out of the song. It seems to be going for a long,drawn out `trippy` vibe but that goes against the lyrcs which are being incredily positive about love imo. There`s a short,snappy power-pop song a la Nick Lowe (get it?) in his late 70`s,early 80`s pop phase or even American 80s college rock takes on `doing a Beatles` style song (Big Star/Dwight Twilley even REM--keep the solo but just shorten it,it can be like What the Frequency,Kenneth`s `almost `reprise` rather than a solo). I didn`t make the long version,and the short one is just under 4 minutes. It should be a 3 minute or so tight disposeable power-pop song--and they`re the toughest to do. Then it`ll just be about the chorus and not the `vibe`.