Mr yodasdad - I notice there is a dinner with greedo here as well - the old force is strong in this forum - I was going to call myself Vader's Helmet but thought it would too much
This is very good my pal
She's got footprints on her heart
She tries to hide them with a smile - those lines are so brilliant
You really can play the piano - the augmented chord you throw in the mid 8 is amaze balls - always good for a mid 8 I think - or a change from section to,section like you do,here
I wasn't sure about the Tracy and racy - rhyme - hope it's ok to say this - it cheapens the song a little - makes it more limerick / jokey - I really don't know now go explain this very good so,please don't take offence
The arrangement is very good - structure wise it flows really good - verse , chorus x2 mid 8 and then chorus - classic structure - and you support this structure well with the addition of some lovely strings
It's a great theme , different from love songs , and it takes balls my pal to write something different - although ed sheerin , a team deals with kind of the same theme - although his also,has drug abuse as well - the full bhuna of ills
Yip it's great songwriting , thoughtful and you have worked to develop a theme which is well packaged and presented
Top work amigo - ho ho ho