i have moved this to completed songs. thanks for all the feedback
this is a song i wrote this past Fall during this height of the last US presidential election cycle mess.
i plan to re-record the song. i need to re-position my vocal microphone because i made a few pops that i can't live with. also the performance on the whole thing could be tighter, and i should probably do this with a click-track, which will make it easier for me to go back and add some percussion and do the bass part properly. (bass is difficult for me to do right)
i'm interested in hearing any feedback, but especially that dealing with thoughts on production.. whether to do a full blown rock and roll thing or stick with a more organic singer/songwriter type approach. i'm leaning towards the latter despite the obviousness of rocking it out.
edited for redo bass line... edited again for EQ tweak
https://soundcloud.com/bonanzalunchbox/damned-or-damaged1we say we want freedom
as we put more shackles on
we say we want peace not war
as we lay the army whore
the usefull things that we dont need
like all the books we'll never read
we win the fight but still concede
we're so damned if we dont
and damaged if we do
We say we want true love
And then we lock our door
We say we gonna rise above
As we're wallerin on the floor
Everybody must hate fun
We’re lying down when we could run
We’re making love and buying guns
We’re so damned if we dont
And damaged if we do
I'm tired, but i can’t sleep
Hungry, can’t eat
I’m wired, aren't we all wired, to wail and weep
We say we gonna feed the poor
But then we kick em down
We say everyones all the same
Well maybe cept for black and brown
The simple things we complicate
All god's children filled with hate
In his name we desicrate
we're so damned if we do
and damaged if we don't.