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Our first song "Still love you" asking for feedback

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The feels

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« on: December 14, 2016, 04:37:32 PM »
The first time I saw you was at a party with friends
I fell in love said to myself the night must never end

Your hazel eyes was sparkling in the lights
I think about them when I have those nights
But then you said let's just be friends
I said okay but my mind said this is the end


No one can replace you in my heart and mind
You are beautiful just one of a kind
Girl I know that you don't feel the same
And I know that you are not the one to blame
Baby I still love you and I always will
And every time i see you my world stands still


As time goes on it still hurts my heart to think of you
But I can't stop no matter what I do
I see you every day and think of us
My dreams at night are a happy place to be just because
But again you said let's just be friends

No one can replace you in my heart and mind
You are beautiful just one of a kind
Girl I know that you don't feel the same
And I know that you are not the one to blame
Baby I still love you and I always will
And every time i see you my world stands still

If we could try again it would be great
I had a feeling we would be great
But dream are just that and I'll dream till the end
But a last time you said let's just be friends

No one can replace you in my heart and mind
You are beautiful just one of a kind
Girl I know that you don't feel the same
And I know that you are not the one to blame
Baby I still love you and I always will
And every time i see you my world stands still

mickyplankton

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« Reply #1 on: December 14, 2016, 05:50:57 PM »
Very moving. Is there any music to go with this?

The feels

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« Reply #2 on: December 14, 2016, 06:22:35 PM »
Not yet Busker we are working on that

The S

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« Reply #3 on: December 14, 2016, 07:23:07 PM »
Hey The feels,

I believe the reason Mic...sorry...Mr. Busker ( ;D ) is asking is because you've posted this in the "Feedback on Finished songs" section. This it seems, as it lacks music, should be in the "Lyrics" section.

Cheers,

S