Hi Vicky - listening, nothing really sticks out at all and it comes over as a breezy and confident tune with a tinge of sadness if you want to think about it.
I do think "expire" is a missed opportunity - I'd probably think about something slightly more regretful - "one more time, but now it seems it's passed me by" or some such.
Anyhow, a nice write and all sounding very good.