Hi kev,
Just been skimming the video progress, its coming along nicely, Stick with it, thats a great song dude.
I reckon, like sub said, make that chorus lift by not going too mad on the verses, then you have somewhere to go.
Also get that vocal nailed and you have a great track on your hands,
As ever Kev, great lyrics.
would love to hit one of your songs with the AtticVibes/Cawproductions stick sometime.
Keep up the good work.
Cheers
Andy