Whatever I need to find

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HardCore

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« on: September 17, 2017, 04:46:01 AM »

Hello guys It has been a while ... too much work ..
Today I took a day off .. I don't know I got inspiration and I wrote this ..
what do you think about ?

https://soundcloud.com/hard_core-1/whatever-i-need-to-find


verse1
this is the hardest thing i ever did
you gotta know I've been waiting for too long now
I've never been good at saying good bye and i fee l like throwing up 
and I feel there's nothing left for me in this place

Chorus
I'll stop saying nice words
and make up some lame excuse 
I need to find my whatever I need to find 

You are the hardest thing I ever won
but have your heart and mind is not as easy as keep you body close
And I should burn the things you left here hoping you will disappear 
and wear a smoke hood so that you can't reach my veins

Chorus
I'll stop saying nice words
and make up some lame excuse 
I need to find my whatever I need to find 

Bridge (x4)
Where are you ...
Where are you now ...

Chorus (x2)
I'll stop saying nice words
and make up some lame excuse 
I need to find my whatever I need to find 

Wolfini

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« Reply #1 on: September 17, 2017, 07:21:19 AM »
I love how you make this song work with such a simple production.

The vocal sound is top notch. How did you manage to get such a close and intimate recording? Impressive.

Beautiful melody, moving and touching. Really great stuff. Congratulations!

Bye Wolfi
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Recent songs: soundclick.com/wolfini

Cawproductions

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« Reply #2 on: September 17, 2017, 08:52:38 AM »
Dude,

This is really nice song, nice strumming patterns, lots of dynamics.

And yes, Your Vocal is top notch,

Great work.

Andy

HardCore

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« Reply #3 on: September 17, 2017, 10:14:37 AM »
I love how you make this song work with such a simple production.

The vocal sound is top notch. How did you manage to get such a close and intimate recording? Impressive.

Beautiful melody, moving and touching. Really great stuff. Congratulations!

Bye Wolfi
thank you very much for the answer
the recording is based on 6 tracks 3 guitars and 3 vocals

the verse is just 1 guitar + 1 vocals
the chorus 2 guitar + 2 vocals
the bridge 3 guitar + 3 vocals

i added 2 plugins to my tracks : one with a little reverb and compressor and one EQ
I recorded everything with the mic Oktava mk319




mickyplankton

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« Reply #4 on: September 17, 2017, 10:42:01 AM »
this is very radio friendly. Agree with the other posters about your guitar and vocals. My only gripe is that you've classed this as #punk# on Soundcloud. Punk it most definitely is not!

HardCore

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« Reply #5 on: September 17, 2017, 10:57:48 AM »
this is very radio friendly. Agree with the other posters about your guitar and vocals. My only gripe is that you've classed this as #punk# on Soundcloud. Punk it most definitely is not!


 ;D ;D ;D

punk  .. it's a way of living and feeling ..

mickyplankton

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« Reply #6 on: September 17, 2017, 11:00:56 AM »
Ha ha. Fair enough Hard Core. I stand corrected!  :) :) :) ;) :)

Wolfini

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« Reply #7 on: September 17, 2017, 11:39:15 AM »
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i added 2 plugins to my tracks : one with a little reverb and compressor and one EQ
I recorded everything with the mic Oktava mk319

Thanks. Then I guess it must be you. ;)

bye Wolfi
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« Reply #8 on: September 17, 2017, 11:40:59 AM »
Find myself Pogo- ing to this Punk Classic and was even tempted to spit at the imaginary audience......oh wait - hang on a minute no I just wanted to sit down and contemplate life and have a cup of coffee and a custard cream ;)

Anyway - Super lovely song - Modern Voice - this style of song is all the rage at the moment in a crowded market. If i heard it on the radio - I would not know it was not from one of the more well known established  boy singers out at the moment - So it hits the mark well.
« Last Edit: September 19, 2017, 08:26:52 AM by Morefrog Jones »

HardCore

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« Reply #9 on: September 19, 2017, 09:08:21 PM »
Find myself Pogo- ing to this Punk Classic and was even tempted to spit at the imaginary audience......oh wait - hang on a minute no I just wanted to sit down and contemplate life and have a cup of coffee and a custard cream ;)

Anyway - Super lovely song - Modern Voice - this style of song is all the rage at the moment in a crowded market. If i heard it on the radio - I would not know it was not from one of the more well known established  boy singers out at the moment - So it hits the mark well.

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