New song i wrote called that beautiful place in the sky

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MUSICINME

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« on: January 14, 2012, 09:48:51 PM »
Hi everyone would like some feedback on a song i wrote  called that beautiful place in the sky tell me what you think here is the link    http://soundcloud.com/johnpattillo/that-beautiful-place-in-the
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MUSICINME

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« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2012, 06:22:34 PM »
Please leave feedback for my song please here is the link http://soundcloud.com/johnpattillo/that-beautiful-place-in-the

Cameron Fielding

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« Reply #2 on: January 15, 2012, 09:05:17 PM »
Very nice indeed. A polished finish to it. Smooth, musical, and harmonic. I like your singing voice, suits this song very well.


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TunSongs

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« Reply #3 on: January 15, 2012, 09:24:22 PM »
Very moving song and sung with the emotion it deserves.
Like your other song, the production is also very good.

Can I ask who the song is about?
Could you please post the lyrics?

Justin

P.S. Welcome to the forum and don't forget to review other people's songs.

MUSICINME

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« Reply #4 on: January 15, 2012, 10:17:01 PM »
Hi  there thanks for taking time to give me feedback
i wrote this song just after my mum  died and the song is about her and how even  when in pain always smiled never complained and how she is now in a better place and need suffer no more  i will post the lyrics  on monday  and once again thanks for the feedback
John Pattillo (uk)