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New song i wrote called that beautiful place in the sky
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MUSICINME
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New song i wrote called that beautiful place in the sky
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January 14, 2012, 09:48:51 PM »
Hi everyone would like some feedback on a song i wrote called that beautiful place in the sky tell me what you think here is the link http://soundcloud.com/johnpattillo/that-beautiful-place-in-the
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MUSICINME
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January 15, 2012, 06:22:34 PM »
Please leave feedback for my song please here is the link
http://soundcloud.com/johnpattillo/that-beautiful-place-in-the
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Cameron Fielding
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January 15, 2012, 09:05:17 PM »
Very nice indeed. A polished finish to it. Smooth, musical, and harmonic. I like your singing voice, suits this song very well.
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TunSongs
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January 15, 2012, 09:24:22 PM »
Very moving song and sung with the emotion it deserves.
Like your other song, the production is also very good.
Can I ask who the song is about?
Could you please post the lyrics?
Justin
P.S. Welcome to the forum and don't forget to review other people's songs.
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MUSICINME
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January 15, 2012, 10:17:01 PM »
Hi there thanks for taking time to give me feedback
i wrote this song just after my mum died and the song is about her and how even when in pain always smiled never complained and how she is now in a better place and need suffer no more i will post the lyrics on monday and once again thanks for the feedback
John Pattillo (uk)
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