Fast Song - Too Late Short Song Competition Attempt

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« on: April 16, 2012, 01:13:06 AM »
Got distracted and didn't finish it in the time allotted for the short song competition but here are the lyrics. I like these competitions, I try to write stuff even though I don't enter(and don't finish always), they are like song writing exercises and I find that really helpful, especially when one is out of idea's at the moment. It's a simple fast paced punk/rock song.

Fast song
Get your straps on.
Cuz this song is only starting
And it's gonna rock on harding
It's a fast song
But will it last long?

(Fast Song, Fast Song, Fast Song, Fast Song)

Fast song
It's a fast song
Running through the lyrics
Like a sprinter chases spirit
It's a fast song
Freak'n fast song, yeah!

Fast song
Really fast song
It's like a kick that's punching
Face that's stomping, Second munching


It's Fast song
Really fast
Cuz I only got a minute
And half so let's get finishing this
Fast song
Bloody Fast song, Yeaaaah!


I'll try to keep it brief
And to the point if I can
And i'll try my very best
To make it come to an end

Well within the time allotted
So I don't get DQed
By the moderators running
This competitive fued

But I can not gaurantee
That I will stay in the time
Because this song is very angry
That it's being confined

And I simply do not know
If I can keep it in check
Oh no, I gotta go
It's trying to be duet
 

Fast song
It's a fast song
Kicking, thumping, pounding, pumping
Facial melting, minds are melding
Fast song
It's a fast song, Waaaaaooooohhh!

(Fast Song, Fast Song, Fast Song, Fast Song)

Fast song
It's a fast song
Licking, humping, stinking, steaming
Everybody's ears are bleeding
Fast song
Really Fast song, WOOAHAOAOAOHAOOHA!


And like a minute waltz
A finish haltz this
Every present, loud and restless
Stupid, silly, short and shrilly
Speedy, shreddy challenge entry
Forcing me to break a string
To finally make it
Come to a halt

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« Reply #1 on: May 13, 2012, 08:24:15 PM »
Has good potential in the beginning, but seems to fade out towards the end with the overuse of "fast song"

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« Reply #2 on: May 14, 2012, 01:25:15 PM »
I found myself disliking the 'meta' nature of it but it grew on me and I imagine that if it were played quite fast and powerful, basically as a punk song, then it would be incredibly fun. I think short, fast, high-repetition songs can be great, like that Blink 182 song (it would be nice, to have a blowjob)...
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