[SOS]

Hey guy,

My band released a music video for our first song last month and would love your opinions on it.

It's called Broken and is the opener for our EP out a few weeks.

If you like it, it'd help us out of you subscribed and went over to like us on facebook which is

www.facebook.com/leaveitblankUK

Thanks,

Luke

[SOS]

Noticed I never put the lyrics up, here they are;

Verse 1) I don’t know where we’re heading
But it’s all I need right now
To find myself and our bearing
Can’t let this moment bring me down

Chorus) Pieces of truth, racing round my desperate youth
Baby you’re the one who comforts me
I’m broken inside, like a hole into my mind
Through which all of my emotions bleed

Verse 2) Kicked up, beat down and shattered
Pieces of my sorry heart
Scattered round like proverbial ashes
Just take right back to the start

Chorus) Pieces of truth, racing round my desperate youth
Baby you’re the one who comforts me
I’m broken inside, like a hole into my mind
Through which all of my emotions bleed

Bridge) Lest we forget the demons, live in my head
‘Cause you released them from their cage
Lest we forget the demons, live in my head
‘Cause they’ve been set free this time

Chorus) Pieces of truth, racing round my desperate youth
Baby you’re the one who comforts me
I’m broken inside, like a hole into my mind
Through which all of my emotions bleed

Chorus) Pieces of truth, racing round my desperate youth
Baby you’re the one who comforts me
I’m broken inside, like a hole into my mind
Through which all of my emotions bleed

[Martinswede]

Hi SOS!

Nice with some rock'n'roll for a change.
Have you listened to the band Grand Magus?
I hear some similarities.  No critique, quiet the opposite.

I think the drums take a bit too much space in the mix.
Bass and vocals could be sore present.
And its on the treble-y side. That's subjective of course.

Cheers,
- Martin