[Roald]

Wow.. that melody on the chorus is so beautiful! One of the best things I've ever heard here on the forum to be honest! I love this kind of 'depressing songs' I guess, it's so full of emotion. Really loved the strings on the intro, they sounded quite natural to me. Only thing I would change is the delay effect on the vocals, but other than that, I think this is an amazing song!

[Johnnyuk]

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[PaulyX]

Hey Johnny
It does sound contemporary.
I like your choice of synth patches a lot in the original.
Plus the way you don’t over emote. It is very well sung.
Lyrically, straight love songs without some kind of twist or motif just don’t grab me... kinda feel I’ve heard so many before if you know what I mean, I zone out on the words. But I know I’m massively in the minority on that and there’s definitely a big appeal to many from a song like this. Good luck with the updated version.