[flossie]

Hi everyone,

I know I've posted this music but it's finished now and I wondered if anyone who knows about production could scrutinise it and let me know if anything needs tweaking. Going to upload it to stock library for approval (hopefully).

Really appreciate it thanks

Flossie
x
https://soundcloud.com/hewood29/massattack

[Neil C]

Flossie, can imagine it used in chase sequence.
I'm not really a producer/engineer but all I'd say watch out for the snare drums with the synths from 25 secs onwards, perhaps a touch more bass too?
Cool
 
Neil

[flossie]

thanks neil, yes I think I hear what you are saying!

Brilliant advice 

[andy5544]

hi flossy, sounded like something exciting would be going if it was on tv 
It sounded quite bassy on my headphones ,they were rumbling a bit , have you tried it on different systems ? might just be my headphones 
good music though 

[garys2811]

Sounds fantastic to me I'm not really able to offer any advice on production but thought I'd just say very well done on a nice peice of music. There's lots of interest packed into a short peice. Sounds great in my headphones.

[flossie]

Well I've adjusted the bass, added a bass line (and a few more bits - this thing is a monster!!!)
Here it is again but it is only short!

Thanks for the advice it really is appreciated (and more is still welcome  )

https://soundcloud.com/hewood29/massattack

Now can anyone give me any ideas what I should call it, what sort of film or ad could you hear it on (not that it will get on one, just for the library!!! )

Thanks
(oops already said that)

[S.T.C]

two words or phrases came into my mind....

one was...regeneration, the other ... interspacial  as titles.

[flossie]

ooh interspacial so sci-fi?
x

[S.T.C]

ooh interspacial so sci-fi?
x

sorry i meant this..Interspatial...my bad spelling



http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/interspatial

[Kafla]

God I go away for a few days and everyone goes techno , techno , techno 

I think this is really well mixed

You'll this this is mad but I can hear it on an advert at the cinema after that - ba ba ba ba ba ba ba - song 

Top work Floss x

[James Nighthawk]

I have listened to the second mix, and all the levels are fine. Just be careful with the kick drum. It is squaring off a little. Be careful of compression settings, or, it is is a sample use a less pushed version (turn down the velocity) which should give you less click.

Good bit of music here tho, lots going on and it works brilliantly. Good library stuff!!

[Binladeda]

NIce one flossie   How about;....thrill of victory....never give up.....news at ten   Love you xx

[flossie]

Hi everyone

@James what do you mean by squaring off, I have added compression to the track and I can tweak the velocity of the sample though!  Thanks.

@Kaf it's just how the track turned out !!! You know me I'm a ballad girl at heart

@binladeda Hmm thrill of victory could be a goer...thanks.

Thanks all
xxx

[James Nighthawk]

On headphones it sounds like the bass drum is hitting s ceiling of sound, hene squaring off. This sounds like a click that isn't inherent to the bass drum sound itself. Try softening the ration of the compressor on the bass drum and/or the threshold. Listen to the drum soloed to hear. Once it sounds natural again mix back into the tune xxx