Now that's a chillin' groove
Loved the beginning and every bit without the vocals. I'm not sure what it is about them, because I kinda like the idea of the delay... maybe the tone is a little grating, not too sure. Maybe they sound a little too harsh in contrast to the mellow backing.
Just how I hear it anyway.
I loved how the guitar came in at the beginning and thought that a nice little touch.
You definately are the master of this genre, whatever it is, I have no idea, but I like it.