[habiTat]

Hey everyone,

As you may know I'm working on a concept album 'The Seven Deadly Brothers'

http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/the-bar/the-seven-deadly-brothers/

I'd like to find someone to read over my lyrics (the whole album) and help me/offer ideas with getting each song to work/fit with the next. Also, when basic recordings are made, I'd like to get some feedback on how you think they work as a whole story and help me develop the general feel of the album.

Rather than go straight to the reviews boards with these strange songs, I'd like to show someone who doesn't mind taking the time to appreciate the project as a whole, rather than just one song at a time as I can't post a whole album to the boards. Once there is some basic continuity, and it's not 'just me' that 'gets it', then I can post the songs individually and get less specific 'story based' feedback.

PM me if you fancy it.

Cheers

hab..

[man of simple pleasures]

i want this album with a cd and booklet with the lyrics in

am sure theres someone to help you with this and get it spot on, theres a few pro's on this board who know what they doing haha!

[S.T.C]

I have good diction..but not sure if i could get you a good recording to use..

[habiTat]

I have good diction..but not sure if i could get you a good recording to use..

I don't need any recordings, I'll do those. Just someone to read, listen and respond really..

[S.T.C]

I have good diction..but not sure if i could get you a good recording to use..

I don't need any recordings, I'll do those. Just someone to read, listen and respond really..

Oh i see  misunderstood  you ,thought you wanted your lyrics read ,,well if you want to send them to me as you write them i will look over them if you like,,but i can`t get to involved at the moment.