Hi SB, this is really good; lyrics keep the interest up, vocals really good and guitar fantastic - love all those fx. I really like the way you've picked out just the strings you want and haven't just blasted the full chords all over it. Mind you, with the title I was expecting it to sound like Iron Maiden ;-)
GTB
Many thanks. Glad you liked it. I'm doing a lot of that kind of picking out of broken chords and arpeggios rather than just full on strumming, it's fun to do and gives an opportunity for more variation within a simple progression than I'd otherwise produce.
By the way, I originally called it "Sail me to Hell" but that seemed a bit esoteric, the new title makes me think, not of Maiden, but AC/DC, they're the ones who did a lot of hellish stuff ;-) But, yes, it's definitely not a metalist song.