Happy Saturday all,
Thank you very much for the comments on my last post!
I am still experimenting with GarageBand and wanted the post another song. This was something I wrote early in the morning while playing on a small Casio keyboard. Just singing to simple chords and thought the chorus was good if not original. The lyrics are unecessarily grim (not from the heart...) and need fixing. I know it’s cheesy but would welcome any comments on the arrangement and chorus. Does it need reworking to not be too by the numbers? Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/user-5387438/flamesSilence, darkness, broken eyes
The devil’s beach I lay my head
On the day I took my life
To see them all see me instead
But look at me now x 2
I am hundred thousand feet above you
Look at me now x 2
Now the world is going up in flames
And I don’t want to take the blame
Look at me now x 2