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Neil
Two feet, two feet of the ground
The crowd has disappeared, not a sound
“Quick find me a ladder”, don’t want this to be seen
“Cut him down carefully so he can be redeemed”
I’m going down
I’m going down
I’m going down to the river to wash away the pain
Danny weren’t a bad man but you couldn’t call him good
Kept himself to himself, went hunting in the woods
Then something caught his interest, something caught his eye
She was running fast but fate has cast the dye
They’re going down
They’re going down
They’re going down to the river to wash away the sin
Bridge
Deep in the Longleaf pines, far from prying eyes
But someone saw something, that they shouldn’t have seen
The sparks had been ignited and the flames grew higher
Tongues were loose, talk is cheap, like kerosene
c 2017 N Connor