Hi,
I’ve listened to the song 3-4 times.
It’s a beautiful song and beautifully sung.
The tone of your voice is very soulful and controlled. I’m, jealous.
There is really very little to be critical of in this song. Its definitely something I would choose to listen to.
Great instrumentation. I think the sensitivity of the song would be lost if you used a more complex arrangement/production on this song.
I think the introduction of the drums, strings, BV’s and Spanish guitar at around 3:20 Is just at the right time.
There are only three things I would look at possibly tweaking to achieve perfection. And please realise I’m digging deep to find these :-)
1. I wouldn’t use the sample of the waves at the start. Just come in with the guitar and voice
2. There’s a really slight pitching issue/glitch at 2:25 on “Kingdom”.
3. The music runs out slightly early in the final fade out (as if there should have been a couple more bars).
Hope this helps, and thanks for a great song.
All the best,
Paul
