Steve! Great stuff! Please don't forget to post the lyrics with your songs when posting in the reviews forum.
Ok, now to review your song:
First off, great recording! I'm assuming either this is a proper studio recording, or you're a bit of a home recording genius? The playing is tight, the sounds are great and fit just right, the feel is relaxed with a little bit of pushing.
This isn't the kind of music I'd normally listen to, but from what I know about it, this is a great example. Arrangement works well, and the lyrics fit well with the feel of the song.
My only criticism is that the vocals could sound a bit stronger - I don't know if it's the effects that have been used, or the mix or what, but they could do with being brought forward a little.
Good work Steve, I'm off to listen to your other one now.
