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« on: March 29, 2010, 09:37:42 PM »
Here is lyrics that I have wrote its a rap and I am making the song soon

(Intro)
Do me a favour please
Put your hand on your chest
Am repeat after me

(Verse 1)
Friend’s family all who are lost
Your never forgotten I now you crossed
Into a better place hope you at peace up there
Every day I stop look up and stair
I see your face in the clouds I won’t let go
Everyone I know they miss you so
A lot of them watched you grow
Won’t ever learn to say goodbye
No matter how hard I try am always asking why
I stayed strong but I had to cry
Now its all crazy how the young die
Everyone out there no matter who you are
You’ve lost someone but don’t worry they the star
That you see in the sky way up high
They looking down onto you so I hope
But its that hope that helps me cope
Get to grips with the fact
That you gone a lot of hurt lives broke no longer in tact
Deep inside my heart wept it cried
Your name calved into my heart when you died

(Chorus)
Now I gota ask why
Why the good die
Why the young die
Shed a tear its ok to cry
Learning to say good bye x3

(verse 2)
When I close my eyes I now
I see you again till I wake up then I let go
All over again now it’s been so lonely without
You never thought I would miss the times we would shout
Got me saying one of the hardest things I ever said
Didn’t think I would hear that you dead
Never knew I could hurt like this
Didn’t think nothing could take away my bliss
You will be missed these memories all I have left
Taking you away that to me is the biggest theft
But I now you at peace were you at rest
Hope the place you in is the best
Think of all the good times that all I can do
These memories now that am without you
You in my dreams sometimes it seems
You still here but I see someone turned off the beams
Of light now you’re gone six feet underground
But you’re not you in heaven listening to a better sound
Living a better life I wonder do you miss me too
Up there never know when I may join you

(Chorus)
Now I gota ask why
Why the good die
Why the young die
Shed a tear its ok to cry
Learning to say good bye x3

(verse 2)
I know that you gone but am kinda happy
Don’t take that wrong don’t get me wrong my life is crappy
Without you there but in a way you are there
You motivated me to write this my life seem bare
Without you so I ask finally why does death come
Were it come from an why it only come for some
At such a young age now I wish that I could see you again
But I now it would be hard letting go again would cause more pain
So in a way I dread to close my eyes
Because I know that my tears will make the tries
Of life the trials it brings seem hard when I weep
So am gona hold on and keep
These memories of you locked away in my heart
When you got taken away it was like a dart
Piecing at my heart loosing someone that’s real pain
Now its a shame we go through it again and again
Now I know men aint meant to cry
But am gona raise my other hand up high
Tilt my head to look at the sky
And try an say this without me having to cry

(Chorus)
Now I gota ask why
Why the good die
Why the young die
Shed a tear its ok to cry
Learning to say good bye x3

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« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2010, 10:49:16 PM »
*Moved to lyrics*

Great work mitch - looking forward to hearing this one as a song.  I can imagine it working really well - good use of rhythm and emphasis.  Like your other song, this is very direct and uncompromising, with no messing around. Keep them coming. :)
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