Hey you all!
I am a new member, new to pretty much all of this. I haven't written that many songs but here is my first original song that I have been happy enough with to stick on you tube. I would reeeaaalllly love some feedback. It's an acoustic guitar and female voice, slow, emotional - just listen, you may like it!
Thanks in advance for any comments or feedback - feel free to comment on youtube too.
Sara x
Lyrics:
I know - please don't say it out loud
don't make it real - help me stay strong and proud
there's no one here anymore,
autumn leaves are on the floor
Everything is falling apart at the seams
and you're still in my dreams
There's no one here anymore,
dust has settled on the floor,
(oooohs and aaahs )
There's no one here anymore,
dust has settled on the floor,
the leaves have fallen, it is the autumn of your life
and soon - soon the frost will come
there's no one here anymore,
frost has settled on the floor,
you're gone, youre gone now
off the stage, took your final bow
there's no one here anymore
you've left the floor...
Lyrics and music by Sarakaikk - please ask permission before using them!
I hope you enjoyed it...
