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Aeroplanes
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shadowfax
Stadium Tour
Posts: 3180
Singer songwriter
Re: Aeroplanes
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Reply #15 on:
October 15, 2023, 09:59:05 AM »
Bit late to the party here, nearly missed it,
you have a very intimate style and this songs shines brightly my friend, everything works so well,
deep lyrics, you seem so sad but i s'pose being seperated from your kids isnt a recipe for happiness.
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rightly
Stadium Tour
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Re: Aeroplanes
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Reply #16 on:
October 15, 2023, 04:02:18 PM »
You do put out these personal, authentic songs.
They're always stiring, perceptive and concise.
This one's powerful in it's seemingly simple production.
I wonder if your nearest and dearest appreciate your songs.
My teenage daughter thinks my creative efforts are an embarrassment to be avoided.
Excellent work, buddy.
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Gavin Faraday
Busker
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Re: Aeroplanes
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Reply #17 on:
October 20, 2023, 04:12:53 PM »
Hi Paul
This song stood out for me. Says probably more about me for why that is. I think there is an authentic feeling of sadness that runs through this song which I like. Hope that makes sense and doesn't sound like a weird thing to say.
Hope you upload more songs soon.
Kind regards
Gavin
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