My Isolation

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wkamen

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« on: January 31, 2023, 06:53:06 PM »


A song I wrote during the 2020 Covid Isolation


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« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2023, 09:49:16 PM »
It’s over…you can come out now 😀

Nice song, well played, sung and produced.

You haven’t given us much else to go on.

Reminded me of this scene from “Steptoe and Son” (not Sanford)
« Last Edit: January 31, 2023, 09:52:01 PM by PaulAds »
heart of stone, feet of clay, knob of butter

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« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2023, 09:50:59 PM »
heart of stone, feet of clay, knob of butter

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« Reply #3 on: February 01, 2023, 12:24:27 PM »
@wkamen - very nice, super smooth, wish you well with this. As @PaulAds  says can you give us a bit more info about it, just think that there could be a bit more contrast between the M8 and the verses, could have a twangy/comp Tele solo after the M8, maybe...

Nice ending

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« Reply #4 on: February 01, 2023, 04:40:31 PM »
Has a real country feel to it - vocal sounds quite a bit like Garth Brooks IMHO. Everything blends very nicely in this. The chorus is well delivered vocally though a slight nit pick is that arrangement wise I feel it could be 'bigger' through layered vocals or through bringing in some strings or the like. Overall this was a very easy listen and had a nice vibe to it.

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« Reply #5 on: February 01, 2023, 04:42:39 PM »
Hi, very nicely produced ,played and sung. Nice relaxed country style.
Nice one

Jamie

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« Reply #6 on: February 02, 2023, 11:20:18 PM »
What a great voice you have for this kind of track... great vibrato.  It sounds kinda of familiar, as if I've heard your stuff before.  The track has a cool leisurely pace throughout - very pro sounding in the production and I like the surprise ending with that unexpected note as the full stop.
It's all too beautiful.

kevysc

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« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2023, 11:23:37 AM »
@wkamen Excellently executed County track. You have a great voice, easy delivery and the backing track supports your vocal nicely. Nice job,

Kevin

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« Reply #8 on: February 05, 2023, 11:35:21 AM »
@wkamen,

A lovely guitar/piano driven song.  Fine vocals too.  Good songwriting on display here in the style of the country music genre.  Typically of this genre, fine imagery to engage the listener.       There is much to like here.

Paul

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« Reply #9 on: February 07, 2023, 08:30:05 AM »
I was struck by the clarity of the vocal recording here - great job. Lovely backing vocals too which lift the chorus. I like those piano touches too.

There are some great lines here - "the outside comes to my window" - you should post the lyrics.

A fine song.

wkamen

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« Reply #10 on: February 09, 2023, 05:10:44 PM »
Thanks to everyone looking in on my song, especially those who replied with comments. !!