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Dear, My Unknown Lover

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Neumi

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« on: May 03, 2024, 11:34:55 PM »
Hey guys, here is a techno-pop ballad I wrote a while ago. It has some beautiful melodies but I dont have the recourses to record something. Lmk what you think

Dear, My Unknown Lover

[Chorus1]
Could any bone break prove my love
I‘ll be jumping down
Top of Burj Khalifa
Falling for so long
Knowing no one comes
I‘m bracing for impact

[Verse 1]
Dear my unknown lover,
I wrote you this heartfelt letter
Knowing it‘s time for me to grow
Open my heart to strangers laws
I‘ve been up for a minute
Looking for someone to commit with
To show me real love, I would give in
If only you were here right now

[Pre-Chorus]
I put you up
Into the sky
So you could be there from day to night
You‘re the stars and sunshine
Always want to have you in sight

[Chorus1]
[Chorus2]
I want a love so diamond rich
Or just a little taste
Of what I never get
Need someone to hold
Knowing no one comes
I‘m holding my own hand

[Verse 2]
Dear My Unknown Lover
Can‘t you leave my dreams when I want ya?
I‘d hand you my heart I wrapped in gold
Would give you my all then even more
I‘ve been up for a minute
Getting lost between strangers bedding
Not finding any love, my destiny
Why cant you prove me wrong right now?

[Pre-Chorus]

I will always be there in sight
Chorus
[Chorus1]
[Chorus2]

[Outro]
What the fuck love, give me just a little
Never had a piece of what could be heaven
Show me what is love, give me just a little
When I look at you, oh could that be heaven
2x
« Last Edit: May 03, 2024, 11:37:16 PM by Neumi »