[James Nighthawk]

Great work on the song. I love the rise and the resolve of the chorus. It is very simple but very endearing. Not a huge amount I can add after the comments above, just saying I enjoyed it

[crystalsuzy]

Very lovely song Alan the lyrics and melody suit very well and your vocals are outstanding I love the harp and guitar, although I agree it could be higher in the mix there are a lot of very 1st class lyrics in this and there isn't a whole lot of variation between them, so I was wondering if speaking a couple of verses just to break it up would suit this   it's lovely as is, so it's just a thought  
really good production...I thoroughly enjoyed listening to this song   CS

[The Ocean Machine]

Hey Alan,

Lovely relaxed song. Great playing and harmonica sounds perfect with it. Bit of a Johnny Cash vibe.'Sometimes I think the harmonica can be a bit piercing, but sounds just right in the mix. I can hear the trees breathing is a really nice line also.