It's been awhile, but I have been working on a few new songs. I'm not sure if this one works or not, so any feedback would be much appreciated. Does breaking away form the song format for so long, add or take away, and does the guitar solo add anything to the song? I know the vocals need some work, but how does the mix sound? Thanks
This may be the first of a series of Circles of Insanity songs
https://soundcloud.com/crystalsuzy/the-circle-of-insantiyRobotic voices on the telephone
Driving me crazy in this cyber zone
Is anyone real; or are they automated clones?
Endless loops turning, me into stone
Fallen down this rabbit hole all on my own
The circle of insanity runs thru humanity
Like a failed experiment, gone horribly wrong
Algorithms control our lives
Cyber threats with no alibi
Information overload is how we survive
What’s fake or real, is hard to decide
Cause looking at a screen; not into human eyes
Makes it very easy to lie
The circle of insanity runs thru humanity
Like a failed experiment, gone horribly wrong
A list appears on the touch screen door
The smart fridge tells you what to buy at the store
The vacuum starts itself to clean the floor
The lights turn on when you walk in the door
And the coffees ready, at half past four
No chores; anymore
We don’t have to think anymore
Smart meters, smart phones, smart fridges,
Smart cars, smart watches and smart TV’s
So many gadgets, so many gimmicks
Making our lives so easy
Are our homes no longer dumb?
Can we finally have fun?
Smart devices get things done
Or, has this war just begun?
:Are robots taking over:?
We know everything you do
Big brother is watching you
The circle of insanity runs thru humanity
Like a failed experiment, gone horribly wrong