Hi Pompey,
Think most peeps said it all but, but for me, only thing that stood out, try cutting the high end from your reverb plugin, that will tame those highs on your vocal, also drop it back in the mix a bit. (I feel I am not the right person to comment on vocals, I literally spend hours trying to make myself sound OK/Passable, Ha, ha)
Great work to Pompey, deep subject and the track gave that feel,
Nice